> Answer #5, first sentence
> "ATMA, a muling program (fairly complex and sophisticated) for single
> player and LAN modes using Windows ..." should probably be "ATMA, a
> Windows based muling program (fairly complex and sophisticated) for
> single player and LAN modes ..."
I wouldn't worry about this. Now THAT is nit-picking! Everybody on Planet
Earth uses Windows, didn't you know that??
> Answer #6, second bullet point, second sentence.
> "After that the game is IN GENERAL stable ..." should probably be
> "After that the game is GENERALLY stable ..."
Conversational to me, and ok. She's not publishing her thesis online,
after all.
> Answer #7, I believe this needs updating.
Dunno.
> Answer #9
> "... automaGically places a screenshot ..." I am sure you wanted to
> "automaTically places a screenshot .."
I'm willing to bet my house she meant this. It's a common geeky kind of
thing to say.
> Answer #20, first sentence
> "...not all of them bad" should be "not all of them ARE bad"
Sorry, hehe, but just not right here. Maybe "AND not all of them...", or
maybe separated with a semicolon, but no way it'll work as written with
your ARE added. I'd call it conversational again and leave it be.
> Answer #20, last sentence
> "Botting is in this group considered cheating by a lot of people ..."
> should be "Botting is considered cheating by a lot of people in this
> group ..."
Boy oy boy what a nitpicker you are!! ;-) Ok, I like your sentence better.
> Answer #20, on that same sentence
> "... and we still talk WITH them" should be "... and we still talk TO
> them"
Wouldn't you rather be talked WITH, than talked TO?
> Answer #21, first sentence
> "... and "mace" for a Heart of the Oak doesn't require a mace class
> weapon, but a mace type such as a flail" Two different main ideas in
> one sentence. The discussion about mace for HotO should be in a
> different sentence someplace else, in the same paragraph.
Nitpicker!! Nitpicker!!
> Answer #22, last sentence
> "... A German guy developed an unofficial patch though, it can be
> downloaded at" should probably be "... A German guy developed an
> unofficial patch, which can be downloaded at"
Conversational and ok with me, but to be proper it needs your idea or AND
or a semicolon.
> Answer #24, second paragraph, third sentence
> "... even if you cant spam any ..." missing apostrophe in cant :)
Absolutely!
> Answer #25, first sentence
> "Short for "duplication". " should be "Short for "duplicating". "
> Duping, dupe-ing, duplicate-ing, right?
Foul! Foul! Nit-picking!!
> Question #16, misspelled "XXXX Stones of Jordan", should be "XXX Stones
> of Jordan" or "XXXX Stoneof Jordans".
Now that's just being unreasonable!
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>
> Oh yeah, I am not a native English speaker either, so pardon me if you
> were right.
Your English is still a lot better than THAT OF most Americans I know! ;-)

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Alice - 29 Jun 2005 17:55 GMT
> > Answer #5, first sentence
> > "ATMA, a muling program (fairly complex and sophisticated) for single
> > player and LAN modes using Windows ..." should probably be "ATMA, a
> > Windows based muling program (fairly complex and sophisticated) for
> > single player and LAN modes ..."
In the original (Gunde's) original sentence, "using Windows" is a
modifier to "single player and LAN modes". In my version, "Windows" is
a modifier for "a muling program". Even though both versions are
understandable, I believe "Windows" should be an adjective to "a muling
program".
> I wouldn't worry about this. Now THAT is nit-picking! Everybody on Planet
> Earth uses Windows, didn't you know that??
Clue #1. Believing EVERYBODY uses Windows. (Here is a news flash for
you. Many and many people, especially in the higher academia world use
Mac. Even though not I as I use Windows and Sun only)
> > Answer #6, second bullet point, second sentence.
> > "After that the game is IN GENERAL stable ..." should probably be
> > "After that the game is GENERALLY stable ..."
The original version may lead to confusion when someone puts the wrong
breath break, i.e. After that the game is in // general stable.
> Conversational to me, and ok. She's not publishing her thesis online,
> after all.
Clue #2. Proposing / suspecting someone would actually publish an
absurd thesis subject.
> > Answer #9
> > "... automaGically places a screenshot ..." I am sure you wanted to
> > "automaTically places a screenshot .."
Mistake in my part, should have been "I am sure you wanted to TYPE".
> I'm willing to bet my house she meant this. It's a common geeky kind of
> thing to say.
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> maybe separated with a semicolon, but no way it'll work as written with
> your ARE added. I'd call it conversational again and leave it be.
not all of them = noun
bad = adjective
Where is the predicate on that clause?
This should paint a better picture, "not all of them" can be replaced
with the pronoun "they", the clause then becomes "they bad".
> > Answer #20, on that same sentence
> > "... and we still talk WITH them" should be "... and we still talk TO
> > them"
Now that I think about it, "talk WITH" sounds okay. I guess "talk TO"
has been the norm in my world, where psychologial values have limited
place.
> Wouldn't you rather be talked WITH, than talked TO?
>
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> > different sentence someplace else, in the same paragraph.
> Nitpicker!! Nitpicker!!
A good writing practice suggests that a sentence should only have one
main idea.
> > Answer #25, first sentence
> > "Short for "duplication". " should be "Short for "duplicating". "
> > Duping, dupe-ing, duplicate-ing, right?
> Foul! Foul! Nit-picking!!
This one is not nit-picking, but a correction instead.
> > Question #16, misspelled "XXXX Stones of Jordan", should be "XXX Stones
> > of Jordan" or "XXXX Stoneof Jordans".
> Now that's just being unreasonable!
Clue #3. Attempting to pass one's preposterous work as someone else's.
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The above clues led me to believe your level of education is somewhere
in the Middle School. May I suggest that you visit your local library
to find resources on getting your High School Diploma / GED? I assure
you that it will be much more rewarding than spending your time using
your Windows to browse adult sites.
Zamboni - 29 Jun 2005 18:46 GMT
> A good writing practice suggests that a sentence should only have one
> main idea.
Nonsense. A well constructed sentence can contain more than one main
idea, especially on a dark and stormy night when the rain falls in
torrents - except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a
violent gust of wind which sweeps up the streets (for it is in Tristram
that our scene lies), rattling along the housetops, and fiercely
agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the
darkness - actually not all that dark, but more dusky or maybe cloudy,
and to say "stormy" may be overstating things a bit, although the
sidewalks were still wettish and smelled of ozone, and, truth be told,
characterizing the time as night is a stretch as it was more in the
late, late afternoon, although it may still be about lunchtime for the
New Zealander crowd valiantly trying to reconnect with their antique
modems, a quaint holdover from the days when information was sent over
burnished copper wires as discreet electrical pulses instead of brief
flashes of digital light.
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freemont - 29 Jun 2005 20:07 GMT
<shnip>
> The above clues led me to believe your level of education is somewhere
> in the Middle School. May I suggest that you visit your local library
> to find resources on getting your High School Diploma / GED? I assure
> you that it will be much more rewarding than spending your time using
> your Windows to browse adult sites.
Sheesh... feel free to flame me for digging you in the ribs a little Ms.
Crankyboots. Feel free to call me uneducated, and suggest that I should
investigate getting a GED. And by all means insinuate that I frequent porn
sites. I get all the porn I need from Usenet, thank you very much.
Check some headers once in a while- does it look like this is coming from
a Windows box?
All these insults are ENTIRELY appropriate for a little grammar gripe.
And shouldn't it read "...led me to believe THAT your level of
education..."?
Somebody's sense of humor must be in remission.

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howldog - 29 Jun 2005 21:03 GMT
><shnip>
>
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>investigate getting a GED. And by all means insinuate that I frequent porn
>sites. I get all the porn I need from Usenet, thank you very much.
thats probably making her even madder, seeing as how all her pay sites
will be so bored and lonely if you dont visit.